How to prepare your submission to Discoveries 2023
BY Discoveries
12th Oct 2022
We are so excited to announce that Discoveries 2023 is now open for entries! We and the Curtis Brown Literary Agency are proud to partner with the Women’s Prize Trust and Audible to run this unique writing development initiative for a third year. Discoveries invites unpublished women writers aged 18 and up, currently residing in the UK or Ireland and writing in English, to submit their works of adult fiction to the Discoveries Prize. The prize doesn’t require writers to have finished a novel – only to have started one – and it is free to enter. We're looking for writing that shows real potential, not necessarily polished drafts.
To enter, all you need to do is send us the opening (up to) 10,000 words of your novel (including any prologue) and a synopsis of up to 1,000 words. Find out more about Discoveries, the prize packages on offer and how to enter here.
The 2023 judging panel is chaired by Kate Mosse, international bestselling novelist and Founder Director of the Women’s Prize; and includes esteemed writers Kiran Millwood Hargrave and Chibundu Onuzo; Lucy Morris, Curtis Brown literary agent; and Anna Davis, Founder and Managing Director of Curtis Brown Creative.
When asked what they’re looking for in a submission to Discoveries 2023 they said…
- ‘A wonderful plot and a book that I want to find out what happens and keep reading’ – Kate Mosse
- ‘At this early stage, it might be a single stand out element – like an amazingly imaginative piece of worldbuilding or a fiendishly clever plot’ – Lucy Morris
- ‘A fresh voice, something that perhaps asks a question that I want to know the answer to’ – Anna Davis
- ‘That spark, that heat that you get when you read a voice or a story or a character that really speaks to you’ – Kiran Millwood Hargrave
- ‘Something that captures my interest and my definition of that is as broad and as wide as you can think’ – Chibundu Onuzo
So, how do you make sure you’re presenting your imaginative plot or unique narrative voice in the best way? Here’s our advice on how to perfect your submission to Discoveries…
OPENING
The openings of books are incredibly important, a good opening will hook your reader and compel them to keep turning the pages.
Make your opening really strong by:
- Getting quickly into your story. Writers often make the mistake of spending a lot of time on scene-setting or introducing characters one by one with lots of information about their personal histories before they actually start the real action of the story. Move straight into the action to engage the reader fully.
- Don’t open with clichés. We’d love to see something fresh, new and intriguing. At all costs avoid openings with people waking up in the morning, characters staggering around with hangovers or long passages about the weather or rather generic landscape. Give us something to hook us in immediately – something which makes the reader curious or establishes a mystery which must be solved.
- But … Openings don’t need to be explosive. An unusual exchange between characters can be as dramatic as a man bursting into a room with a gun. Your opening should set the tone for the novel which follows it.
- Establish the necessary context quickly. We need to know, rapidly, where we are as readers. If your novel is set in the past, drop some clues very early as to when the action takes place. If your story is told by a child, let us know fast how old your narrator is. Help us to settle quickly into your story so that we can lose ourselves in it…
- Read over your material on the page before you send it in. Yes, we do think it’s a good idea to print out your material on the page – old-style – and sit with a pen in your hand to make edits before you enter the competition. It’s also a good idea to read your work out loud to yourself to see how it sounds – particularly when you have lots of dialogue.
SYNOPSIS
We do know, of course, that it’s hard to write a great synopsis before you’ve finished writing your novel. But give it your best shot. We’d like to see one good page (up to 1,000 words but do keep it a bit shorter than that if you can – around 500 words should be adequate) to show us where your story is headed. Here are our tips:
- One-line pitch. Start with a sentence which tells us what’s really at the heart of your story – this is, essentially, your one-line pitch. If that’s impossible for the kind of book you’re writing, head your synopsis up with a line from your novel which carries some of its flavour.
- Give us the brushstrokes of your story. We want to know the through-line of your plot. Try to be clear and concise, and don’t drop in lots and lots of character names, settings and minor events. If you have a twist in the tale, it’s up to you as to whether you want to include that in the synopsis, but we should certainly get the arc of your story.
- This is a prize for unfinished manuscripts, we understand that your story may develop and change – we aren’t expecting the synopsis you submit to be followed to the letter just be sure to give us the big picture of your narrative. Should you be long or shortlisted, an updated synopsis won’t affect your chances of winning.
- If possible (and without being too corny about it) try to get some of the tone of your novel into your synopsis so that it reads entertainingly and not like a characterless business document. A synopsis rarely works if it is written from the protagonist’s point of view or written in a first-person perspective. So, we recommend writing it in the third-person.
- Remember – this is an overview of your novel, not a detailed plan. We don’t need full chapter-breakdowns – just the key points of your story.
- Avoid putting in any value judgements about your own work. This isn’t a blurb on a published novel. Don’t tell us it’s going to be the next bestseller or that it’s gripping and moving etc. Frankly, we’ll be the judge of that!
TITLE
Finally, make sure that you give your novel a title. It doesn’t matter if you change it later – it’s still better to have a working title than none at all. A title gives your book an identity. It will also make it much easier for the readers and judges to talk about it.
PROOFREAD
We’d love it if you could make sure that your work is pleasant for us to read. This is how we’d like you to do it:
- Remember to proofread. Check your spelling, grammar and punctuation.
- Make sure you include paragraph breaks and set your dialogue out correctly with a new line for each new speaker – all of this makes your material easier to read by our judges.
- Check that your word count does not exceed 10,000 words.
Best of luck preparing your submission to Discoveries 2023. We’re so excited to read your work!